Only critique I have is: mastering. You need to tone down the high frequency on this. Otherwise, it's quite catchy.
I think that may be your headphones giving you the trouble with the high ends, I even triple-checked, it sounds fine on a few pairs of headphones on my end.
let me guess, long arpeggiated notes.
do you ever write anything without arpeggiators and premade gates?
lols kinda i use arps in ReFx Nexus ^^
This sounds it came right out of the game Earthbound for SNES.
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